I was inspired by twilight , im writing my own vampire story. can you please read part of it? thanks?

I took the long cold lonely walk home from school seeing as though i would be doing this as a lesson that i will never learn for about 6 months since i wrecked one of my granfather's cars this past summer.On the 4th of july a couple of friends and i decided to be irresponsible drunk drivers without a care in the world , totally wasted coming back from a night on the town i swurved my grandad's chevy pick up truck off of the road into the woods right outside of my house that i shared with my grandparents for about 13 years of my 17 years of life that i thought was over.Luckily for a few of us a tree blocked us from darting straight into the creek just behind the woods.Well one of us werent so lucky my forced friend Andrews who was lying dead on the side road never made it to th woods because he never was with us.Intoxicated with excitement and liquor we ditched the car in the woods to find him down the hill that was just a about a little less than 4 feet down off of the road in the gr stiff and ice cold.I thought it was the alcohol that had me seeing things , how random could this be, him lying here totally dead as a door knob and i just survived nearly dying in a car accident. I knelt beside him confused with tears slowly slipping out of my eyes surfing down my face trying to use my arm to whipe them aside I couldnt understand what just happened. I had forgotten all about whatever bruises i had or open cuts because this would cause that night's event to happen. I looked up at one of my friends Nathan panicing barfing on the side the road i guess terrified wondering were we the ones who did this, while my other friend Garth tended to him trying to console him, then the cut on my arm as i whiped my last tear spilled out a drop blood landing on Andrews top lip. I noticed his toungue swung around it licking the blood away ,with the coloring around his eye pupils turning from blue to white he started to smile as if the taste of my blood gave him some kind of high he began to speak " campbell's mmm mmm good " grabbing at wrist opening his mouth preparing to take a bite out of a huge hamburger that was my arm.I tried my hardest to pull my arm away from this once weak ,damn near pathetic 17 year old who i protected many of times but the hardest i tried to pull away the tighter and harder he pulled my arm towards his open mouth feeling as if my forearm was gonna be ripped from the rest of my arm. Observing what was happening as i struggled on the ground with Andrews queer insanity trying to bite my arm, I noticed wounds on his neck that resembled bite marks.From a short distance Garth and Nathan looked on holding eachother giving me flashbacks of one of the cartoons i hated the most they reminded me of scooby doo and shaggy. Finally growing some and atleast attempting to stop whatever was going on, Garth clutched Andrews shirt collar " hey let him go queer!" i guess whatever Andrews was going threw his emotions took over not forgetting Garth was the one who picked on him constintly bribing him , bullying , and minulating his life, within seconds Garth was pinned to a tree feet off of the ground with Andrews at his neck.I could see biting and blood shed as i held my arm looking from the ground.He then flung Garth's body to the side on the ground noticing Nathan running he still kept eye contact with me "You always do that Easton, you , you screw me over to be with these animals!" Whatever he was , he kept his whiny b!tching giving people the perspective that he was queer ways. I remained silent still not believing what i was seeing he continued on " We were gonna play video games Easton! eat barbeque , watch movies , have fun, thats all i wanted", then from being back towards the tree gripping it , in midair he rushed towards me yelling out "But u screwed that up my friend !!!". Before I got from the ground to attempt an escape a figure took off with him.Up in the night sky I could here him screaming.Without a thought i left the scene clueless and dumbfounded forgetting Garth could be dead in the woods somewhere and there could possibly be vampires out there. I left the street and went inside my grandparents house. No wonder didnt anybody here the comotion outside of the house, my grandfather was playing loud annoying polka music on the stereo in the living room while my grandmother danced with him. I rushed ped the scenery of that straight up to my room looking up at the stars with my window wide open letting in a breeze i dozed off suprisingly gettin a goodnights sleep." GET UP!!! you destroyed my car you ungrateful , ungrateful little ! " I looked up it was my grandfather yelling loudly then trying to lower his voice and calm hiself down , i then looked towards the window hearing the town police sirens and seeing the red and blue lights glowing , i looked back towards my grandfather who favored tony saprano "come're!!!" he said grabbing the back of my neck forcing from the